One thought on “Jess’s Independent Writing – Clumber Park Recount

  1. Great writing Jess. Well done for ordering the events on our trip and for using adjectives to improve your work. Try to use a range of time connectives to sequence all the events on our trip to make your writing even better.
    Well done Jess!
    Miss Boot 🙂

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