Lewis’s Independent Writing – Clumber Park Recount

First we slowly stepped in the cosy and relaxing coach. Next we went into the warm room. After we happily found some large posts. Then we ate our school lunch, it was yummy and delicious. After that we went on the fun play park. I went on the climbing frame and the spiders web. Finally we quickly went on the coach, the chairs were fluffy.

One thought on “Lewis’s Independent Writing – Clumber Park Recount

  1. A fantastic recount Lewis. Well done for using time connectives to sequence events within your recount. Well done for using adjectives to make your writing more exciting. Try to use adverbs in all your sentences to make your writing even better.
    Well done Lewis!
    Miss Boot 🙂

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