Rhys’s Independent Writing – Clumber Park Recount

First we happily got on the cosy, colourful coach. Next we slowly went in an exciting room. After that we quickly found some small posts. Then we happily ate all of our scrumptious lunch. Next we went to an awesome play park. Finally we quietly went on the bus home.

One thought on “Rhys’s Independent Writing – Clumber Park Recount

  1. Fantastic writing Rhys. Well done for including a range of adverbs, adjectives and time connectives to improve your sentences.
    Well done Rhys!
    Miss Boot 🙂

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