Will’s Independent Writing – Clumber Park Recount

First we went on the noisy, comfy coach. Next we went in the cosy, quiet, exciting room. Then we went to find the heavy, wooden posts. After we went to have schools yummy, delicious dinner. After that we went to the fun, playful park. Finally we went on the relaxing, fluffy coach.

One thought on “Will’s Independent Writing – Clumber Park Recount

  1. A great recount of our trip to Clumber Park Will. Well done for using time connectives to sequence events. I am impressed to see you using a range of adjectives to improve your sentences. To make your writing even better try to use adverbs in your recount.
    Well done Will!
    Miss Boot 🙂

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